Your article is clear and easy to read as the columns and pictures are well placed. The addition of the date time, page number and advert make it a true magazine. A touch of colour can be added to make the magazine stand out more.
You've got good attention to detail with the layout elements such as page numbers, branding, columns and so on. Remove the boxes around the text when you export. There are some careless mistakes which could have been resolved by a spellcheck and proof reading on Word. You could also look at the structure of the journalism- after the conclusion, you give a quote that is anti-piracy, which is confusing! Vanessa
Your article is clear and easy to read as the columns and pictures are well placed. The addition of the date time, page number and advert make it a true magazine. A touch of colour can be added to make the magazine stand out more.
ReplyDeleteYou've got good attention to detail with the layout elements such as page numbers, branding, columns and so on. Remove the boxes around the text when you export. There are some careless mistakes which could have been resolved by a spellcheck and proof reading on Word. You could also look at the structure of the journalism- after the conclusion, you give a quote that is anti-piracy, which is confusing! Vanessa
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